Realm of Eternal Rain

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    Realm of Eternal Rain

    Eternal rain
    is like eternal pain
    eternal mame
    or being eternally slain
    the sun doesn't come out
    it just rains and pours
    you'll tell them to smile
    but they say what for?
    there is no laughing
    crying is the key
    bookshelves stacked high
    with the ingredients to misery
    the falsehood of happiness
    will leave you believing
    the realm of eternal rain
    the way things should be
    the way thing have to be
    the way they are
    your walking barefoot
    and paradise is afar
    but theirs no way to stop it
    the rain just falls
    no, no way to stop it
    and no one to call
    this is the way it is
    how it works in this city
    no joking, no kidding
    no praise just pity
    the nights get cold
    the salt drops in your eye
    but there nothing to do
    except lay down and die
    for the rain is eternal
    eternal means for life
    there no second thinking
    no maybe
    no might
    it gets wet you can bet
    feelings dry when you cry
    it just rains forever
    with no sunshine



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    orsonav commented on Realm of Eternal Rain

    02-22-2009

    This is a perfect 10. I love this poem. The imagery is there, the style is unique. Keep doing what you do.

    Chi commented on Realm of Eternal Rain

    02-22-2009

    very good. Chi.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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