rebirthing death

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    rebirthing death

     i see your eyes painted in black
    from that day I'll never get you back
    the darkness shrouded your soul
    and on my conscious  it takes a toll
    leaving me in this evil state
    giving satan all the bait
    he takes it in like a deep kiss
    savoring all the emotions with bliss
    here i am now all brokenhearted
    because we are forever to be departed
    with this knife of reality i take the kill
    your deception, giving me the will
    with my reaction i'll never look back
    until my exsistance fades to black

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    daughterofnyx commented on rebirthing death

    07-24-2010

    beautiful. the title is what really captured me. great poem.
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    1990lh commented on rebirthing death

    10-29-2009

    sorrowfully powerful this was, i enjoyed the read, very well put together and your words holds truth within them even though dark, but hey most thingd are if you look at them hard enough
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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