Reflected

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    Reflected

    On the face of the moon
    The naked light
    Melting icicles
    Bursting my window
    Chrysanthemums
    In knots... and
    I sleepless untie slowly,
    Dip your crayon on my flame
    and dare paint summer landscapes
    A house and three of milky chocolat,
    outline more as fireflies hum
    my missing pocket
    In rhythmic Kitaro
    Glassful, brimming
    You, utsukushii
    I drink for my dreams
    (c) 2009 v.j.m.a






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    dahlusion commented on Reflected

    07-07-2009

    Beautifully surreal in all of its imagery, voicing, and presentation. "Dip your crayon on my flame and dare paint summer landscapes"— absolutely gorgeous!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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