Remember Me.

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    Remember Me.

    Reminising on a love from my past,
    No hard feelings, it just was not ment to last,

    I hope you have became all you ever wanted to be,
    Sometimes I still wonder if you think about me,

    Yesterday I saw an eagle soaring through the sky above,
    It reminded me of you, my first love,

    Reckless, defiant, wild, and free,
    And I hope that is how you remember me.

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    retrogeegee commented on Remember Me.

    05-13-2009

    Ah, I like the image of the former love as an eagle. The grammar and spelling needs cleaning up. I think you have misspelled reminiscing in line one and became should be become in line three. These are just mechanics. I think the tone and rhythm are great. Keep writing!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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