REWIND

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    REWIND

    i wish to have a wish
    that i could go back in time
    to see and warn myself
    that it's not the right time

    i thought it was too late
    it was not, but it was too early
    when i told you what i feel
    guess you weren't ready

    april 14 when i called you down stairs
    and asked you a favor
    "can we talk over there?"
    you said yes while waiting for a friend
    but i didn't know that was my end

    i told you what i feel
    and i know it was right
    everything changed
    everything lost it sight

    you weren't ready
    you can't commit
    and there's nothing i can do
    i lost, i admit

    days had passed
    from the day i confessed
    wish i could go back
    to clean up this mess

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    staryoung commented on REWIND

    09-10-2009

    I have felt this way! Sometimes I'm glad I cant go back in time to change things, those sitations have helped me in some way, opening my eyes to realize my faults or to make me a stronger person for the future events. Life must go on.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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