Seems not

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    Seems not

    Write like life has no end/ trapped by my pad/ drenched in my pen/ where do i begin/ lost in this rifting raft of sin/ friends no longer friends/ blinded by the lite/ yo gurl no longer luvs u/ cry about it every nite/ realizing a man has no end/ if this was only rite/ how can u love me an leave me/ then fuck my friend da same nite/ jus realize to come/ i bite back wit vengance/ creep if u want to/ yo punishment has no sentence/ these are the lifes an times of mental criminal instance/ grasp to yo breath/ breathe in all that is life/ come forth to all yo dreams an wishes/ hold them tight/ cause a woman is a well breed criminal/ dressed in her well comforted tights/ body shaped jus rite/ why do i feel like this tonite/ is it because yo pic is what i find on his page at nite/ seeing as if my eyes have no sight/ wide shut is how i sleep/ my heart has no beat/ become cold blooded as i sweep/ young pety wishes/ under my door step, time has come a wasted so set forth an true/ so how did i find out da dirt about u/ Confusion is what i am pertaning to

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    Renee77 commented on Seems not

    06-12-2009

    I really was feeling your poem, all I can say is I found poetry a long time ago to lash back at people. Your poem was great I enjoyed it.

    DAS

    06/22/2009

    appreciate the love fa real

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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