shattered

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    shattered
    My heart is shattered
    everything’s black
    immobilized by pain
    blind by flashes
    screaming in my head
    crushed not able to breathe
    pain is unbearable
    my heart is shattered
    I can’t see
    I can’t move
    I can’t feel
    I try to breathe
    nothings right
    everything’s wrong
    torn to pieces
    shattered like glass
    with no one to turn to
    no one to talk to
    dieing inside
    no air surrounds me
    I’m so cold
    I let my tears
    out
    thoughts racing
    through
    my head
    my heart is shattered

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    dmilphil commented on shattered

    08-04-2009

    I pray you are ok. Very direct. I wonder what it is about?
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    ccslim commented on shattered

    03-08-2009

    Nice rhythm and content. Good work!
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    mykhail commented on shattered

    03-04-2009

    I really liked this, your lines are short, descriptive, and to the point, a great and true poet can get the world's attention in just a few words, excellent!
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    DeepEclipse commented on shattered

    03-03-2009

    A poem that screams for an outlet. Nice
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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