~Silence Laments~

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  • Sadness

    ~Silence Laments~

    A name carved upon flesh,
    Bleeds free the disease,
    As angry skin screams


    ...Blue turns to red...


    ~The rhythm ebbs~


    Etched upon her presence,
    A crudely honed monument,
    Sculpted, in the visage, of dying dreams


    ...Red dries to black...


    ~Silence laments~


    For her, no one else shall grieve

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    ccslim commented on ~Silence Laments~

    12-16-2009

    I love the depth of this! It left me a visual moment of painful transgression with a tempo that is as fluid as the blood that ebbed! Superb!

    cmlestrade commented on ~Silence Laments~

    08-10-2009

    Very captivating, just a hint of mystery, again superb use of rhythm.

    Deckard commented on ~Silence Laments~

    07-02-2009

    very strong work here. nothing wasted...blak, blue and red used well in producing an emotional response. your work is like your photo...exuding confidence! excellent work!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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