Silent communication

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Silent communication

Those slow-moving afternoons of the last year's blue July, you were standing for hours by the phone with the dilemma on your finger-tips, which were retreating finally and tuning the apparatus to your heart's beat.

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poetikkk commented on Silent communication

08-03-2009

this poem is a good intriguing start but it seems undeveloped. I love the dilemma on your fomgertips. Nicew and original, Push yourself mor eon this one.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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