someone else' home

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  • Sadness

    someone else' home
    ive been gone..

    gone....

    far from what i called my paradise..

    Ive been away..

    away..

    away from what i imagined my heaven..

    ive been.....

    where?

    in a place where even ants cant live..

    where crying is a melody and laughters a curse..

    a place where saints were murdered..

    and priests were condemned..

    ive been where

    tuxedos and gowns are exclusive..

    a place where love is never a word..

    a place where only you can hear you..

    a place where i would never wanna be..

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    PRober commented on someone else' home

    07-20-2009

    sounds like self-imposed isolation? scary... but good!
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    DeFhine

    07/20/2009

    thanks for the comment.. im scared too.. its like im never me..

    cassius commented on someone else' home

    04-13-2009

    i feel thew concept powerful piece
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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