Sometimes I feel the world hates me

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    Sometimes I feel the world hates me

         Sometimes I feel the world hates me, and love never comes.....

      Iv been waiting, waiting hope fades away.                 
    When I feel the hope comeing back and it's restored as happy as ever.   

     love never lasts.Ifeel my heart being ripped in two, the smiles fade, hope disapears into thine air the love has gone.

     I know it will come back, but the wait is full of hate. I dont know how much I can take. sometimes I feel the world hates me. 

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    FranzJ commented on Sometimes I feel the world hates me

    11-18-2009

    you are too young to feel that way - the whole world is ahead of you - nice poem
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    Charlie23 commented on Sometimes I feel the world hates me

    11-13-2009

    Don't ever let the world get you down kiddo, cause it's not your problem it's theirs. Keep up the good work, hope we get to see more writing from you in the future!
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    IzzyGumbo commented on Sometimes I feel the world hates me

    11-11-2009

    Oh sweetness... I don't know what makes you feel in such a way, but let me say, that for 13, the way you've poured your heart out here, there is nothing but talent in the works, deep thinking and feelings too. Nothing 'unlovable' about you!!! Bravo little Poet... you keep writing, expressing and I'll be here reading :) Cheers to you!
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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