STORM

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  • Heartache

    STORM


    Poetically uncommon,

    upside down, inside out,

    side by side at times,

    silently i cry...

    Storm of a lifetime deep inside,

    lamp post weepimg from rain,

    teardrops in vain,

    you took your love away...

    Think of me when i'm gone,

    shredded photos litter the ground,

    waste not, want not,

    when love was new,

    Remember, 'I Loved You'...

    "AXA"

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    justastar2 commented on STORM

    06-07-2009

    Well written with good imagery and flow. This was an emotional and powerful expression of your feelings. Keep writing and thanks for sharing
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    AXA

    06/07/2009

    thank you for your comment, it's greatly appreciated.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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