suprise suprise

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    suprise suprise

    suprise suprise
    i dont even think i look suprised
    in my eyes, they might be suprised
    i was suprised when i lost my grandpa
    i was suprised when i got my first job
    i was suprised because i lived to see twenty
    i was suprised when i caught my first charge
    somethings you have to disregard
    i was suprised when i started selling drugs
    im really suprised because i am loved
    especially from the one above
    we will always have eachother
    i dont have to put up a battle
    suprise suprise
    i think im suprised
    one day this will all rise

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    Aza commented on suprise suprise

    07-10-2009

    No surprise why I iike this. You are so honest and aspiring to be more.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    shawty21’s Poems (20)

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    how would life feel 0 07/10/2009
    how i feel 0 07/10/2009
    trust 0 07/10/2009
    the world 0 07/10/2009
    what is love 0 07/10/2009
    my life 0 07/10/2009
    two faced people 0 07/10/2009
    what is friends 0 07/10/2009
    wishing my grandpa would come home 0 07/10/2009
    HIM 0 07/10/2009
    confidence 0 07/08/2009
    losing my grandpa 0 07/08/2009
    the man im in love with 0 07/08/2009
    love 1 07/08/2009
    messing up what i like 0 07/07/2009
    love makes you mad 0 07/07/2009
    my life 1 07/07/2009
    seeing the one you love in pain 0 07/07/2009
    my feelings for this person 0 07/07/2009
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