Tear Drops

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    Tear Drops

    One drop for you
    Another for me
    A tear is added to this vast sea
    Cold with Sorrow
    Black without love
    I see this light
    As white as a dove
    I strech for this light
    But i can not reach
    I jump for this light
    But miss and fall
    Fall off the cliff
    Untill I do not exist
    Then I'm back where i was
    And they all say its just because
    One drop for you
    Another for me
    A tear is added to this vast sea
    Until there is no more me

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    FiloRozzell commented on Tear Drops

    03-31-2009

    I feel that beautiful

    syed commented on Tear Drops

    03-26-2009

    This one is even better than the first one ....... two thumbs up

    janetdawson commented on Tear Drops

    03-26-2009

    u did very well

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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