The Bloom
In a jar, in a dim roomOne small bit of happiness
Still manages to bloom.
The Bloom
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This may seem like a haiku with a wrong syllable count, but it was just part of a writing challenge I gave to myself- poem of 3 lines, 7 syllables each. Why that count I don't know, but I invite others to try it, if they want to.
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boomboom56 commented on The Bloom
11-23-2009
- True stuff. Makes folks realize that it's not all bad. I would like to get my hands on one of those jars. Peace.
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