the curse

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    the curse

    tears fall upon the ground
    without makin a sound
    they fill the ground's thrist
    because of this curse
    the curse to live without the one i love
    who is under the mud
    mud i have created with my tears
    my greatest fear has came true
    i lay red rose upon your grave
    to show my love for you is still strong
    it has been so long since i have belonged
    now i live with this curse
    you were my first
    and now you're my last
    the moon and i are the only ones out tonight with you
    the moon lightens the path to you every night
    some times the moon cries when he watches my sufferin
    i can not speak
    all i can do is express my feelings for you
    so i walk alone across the grass covered with dew
    back to the place that once was filled with laughter and cherished times
    but now is darken and sadded now
    i want to join you
    if only you knew
    you brighten my gloomest days
    by layin close to me
    you gave me hope when i was in my deepest doubts
    by reachin out to me
    but now i cry myself to sleep on your grave
    and ill be gone before day break
    tears fill the sky
    when i cry
    so i join you now
    i dont care how

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    lucky62 commented on the curse

    10-30-2009

    I felt every ounce of pain in this wonderful poem you have a talent for this bud keep up the good work.......

    scarlet commented on the curse

    10-16-2009

    Beautifully written, so sad and broken, i know how it feels to lose someone you love, its never easy. keep writing you definately have a talent. Plus its therapy for the soul

    Ocean4u commented on the curse

    10-12-2009

    J.C. this poem was so sad but beautiful at the same time you expressed your pain so vividly ...nice job!

    knight4696 commented on the curse

    10-10-2009

    Jon - A very deep and emotional piece! Death of a loved one can be so devastating and soul consuming. Be it actual or metaphorical ... The same is true in either case. Nice Work!

    am2anangel commented on the curse

    06-08-2009

    very deep and moving piece. i liked the picture you painted with your words. the dirt of the grave turned to mud by your tears was especially well done. nice job.

    jonwalksalone

    10/10/2009

    thanks i guess this will be the last of my work i leave this march to iraq

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