Restless mind

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Restless mind

   When you open your eyes
looking into mine
seeing our brightest days
so we just lay
you in my arms
hoping i will not cause no harm
thinking of what could be
letting my mind run free
watching your smile brighten up this room
I do not want this moment to end anytime soon

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Artie commented on Restless mind

09-06-2010

Very nice. You express you feeling well - 10 from me

tsmith commented on Restless mind

04-19-2010

aww it is this is sooooooo cute. short and yet sooo sweet lol nice job

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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