The forsaken feeling

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    The forsaken feeling

    Love is but a milestone that
    every person overcomes in their
    small mortal life;
    The deeper the love the harder life becomes;
    Some say it is inevitable that every
    person experiences true heartache;
    If it be from a long lost lover;
    A betrayal from a cherished friend;
    Or even the lost feeling of the first breathe a child takes without its mother;
    All are destined to weep, if not a single tear;
    For they are human and have
    the forsaken feelings of love.

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    Margot commented on The forsaken feeling

    09-05-2009

    very good poem i like writing about real life issues as well. check out some of my work

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