The Game of Balance

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In a conversation with my poet buddy, I realized I hadn't written in awhile as my head has been swimming with things tgo do and time has been short. I realized I have been seeking balance and was yet to find that right system at this moment in my life and suddenly I knew I had to write about it. I'm a bit rusty as I haven't written in months, so this is just a start. Hope it holds value for you and your life.

The Game of Balance

Walking the line
Between the inane and insane
Pulling back from the edge
To stabilize my brain

This is the game of balance
I play almost every day
In the hopes of finding moderation
Each attempt in another way

My flaws exposed to the world
I no longer have the power to hide
As people have begun to see
The feelings I held deep inside

And so the game goes on
Though I struggle in my plight
I have to make a difference
And strive to do what's right

Balance is the goal
In a world of extremes
Where even in my own mind
I'm living far beneath my dreams

I cannot measure up
To someone else's view of me
I have learned to listen to my own voice
And just be the best person I can be

And in the process I find
I'm the only one to commend or to blame
And joy comes only in moments
Balance is only the beginning...not the end...
...of the game


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not2foolish commented on The Game of Balance

08-15-2009

ha...i friggin love it..wow...i didnt know you had that stylin in you!!!love the first and last stanzas...starts off so strong and finishes so smooth...the perfect balance...i think subconsciously, you meant to do that....im really glad ur writing again, but now i have to take up the challenge and attempt reach that bar u just set...sweet!!!

globalgal

08/16/2009

Thank you...I wasn't sure how it would be received and it's been awhile since I put any poems out there. I wanted to go for a strong finish and I really had no idea where it was going to end up, but it all just worked out. Thanks for the comments and I look forward to seeing your poem!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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