The gust of the autumn wind
Slowly trespassing through the meadow, I feel the stillness of the earth, As if time has stopped by, And the world snoozing with ease, I savoured the charm of autumn, Embracing my being, As the zephyr turned as a silhouette of nature, I stopped awhile to feel its presence, The trees stood motionless sheltering the birds, And the sun ensuing towards its home, Ignorant of the upcoming wind, I start feeling the bliss of amity, As the sudden storm eclipsed upon, The silence deceased instantly, Birds ascended towards their nest, Somewhere drifted apart the clouds, The howl that replicated the ire, Nudged against the tranquillity of the soil, A guest for a moment or so, The wind horrified the feeling of earth. And I slowly moved aside, Evading from the gust of its heart.The gust of the autumn wind
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lorenzo commented on The gust of the autumn wind
08-16-2010
- a new poem from Priyanka.....a new reason to rejoice...a fine poem it is.
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ApaqRasgirl commented on The gust of the autumn wind
07-24-2010
- wow, I loved this piece, this was very well written, and the flow was easy to read even though it was laid out like a paragraph, that did not affect the outcome and smooth reading of this poem. great write my dear, your words painted a wonderful picture of an autumn afternoon storm brewing. thanks for this wonderful read love asha
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stellar commented on The gust of the autumn wind
07-24-2010
- The imagery is superb...refreshing...cool...a pleasure to read....thank you...^_^ v
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GentleT commented on The gust of the autumn wind
07-24-2010
- A verse filled with tantilizing the senses. Your descriptive words takes you to the meadow with the wind in your hair.
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