The Heart

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  • supasta225
  • wrote a poem for my mom earlier but can't seem to remember it so i can put it on here :(

Poem Commentary

I actually wrote this poem for extra credit in my ANATOMY AND PHYSIOLOGY CLASS. We had to write one about our favorite organ.

The Heart

The heart beats,

Even when its broken.

The heart beats,

Its words unspoken.

The heart beats,

Against all odds.

The heart beats,

Until it stops.

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StandingBear commented on The Heart

06-04-2009

Another great write! More! More! -------------------------------------- ----------------------------- 10

BDIsernhagen commented on The Heart

06-04-2009

great contrasting images, and the last two lines stop me in my tracks. 10 and i'll be recomending you to a few friends I have here.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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