The Key

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    The Key

    The Key


    As much to heal  my wounds......
    The path set before me I'm to walk alone........
    An uncomprmiseing faith will grant me a key....
    Openning a way to give myself a dream......
    It's so easy to cloud up my mind....
    When all I've done is pretend....
    For so long I've been fakeing it.....
    It can be difficult to tell who's a friend......
    I've come to fool Myself so completely....
    That I can keep it all between the lines.....
    But, now those lines seem to blur.....
    What wispers deep within my heart....
    So often I've turned a deaf ear....
    Never before have I felt so umsure.....
    Only that things will come to an end....
    I've been so long to be on my own....
    I want so much to give myself a dream....
    This thought in the back of my mind....
    It's all I can think about sometimes it seems...
    All along I continue to just keep takeing it...
    All the saddness and frustration.....
    I hold it all and the bitterness inside of me....
    But,I know I'll be just fine,for I have the key....
    One day soon,I'nn give myself a dream.....
    And I'll set myself free......(amen)                      by Bryan/copyrite

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    kittman101 commented on The Key

    07-01-2009

    sometimes in life all we have is dreams, and thats soemthing no one can take away. awesome work
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    kdavidscott1 commented on The Key

    06-04-2009

    I love it Bryan (use spell checkers to correct your spelling / double check your work before submitting it). Free your mind from what use to be - especially now since you have the key. Let the past be the past that all it can be - for life has much more for your eyes to see. Take your time for now you're free - be cautious, alert, and seriously. Move on with your life like the ocean and sea - crashing in on your life so gone turn the key.... KD
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    Kukia

    06/04/2009

    TY Davidsott,ur right on many points

    sincere commented on The Key

    06-01-2009

    Lovely! I've become a real big fan of your work. It seems we have alot in common, being lost in thought and indecisiveness.
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    Kukia

    06/05/2009

    I'm very greatful sincere,TY

    ladydraeko commented on The Key

    06-01-2009

    wow I can really relate to this poem. You have a lot of feelings inside that parallel mine. I am totally enjoying what you have written!! hugs
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    SilverGirl commented on The Key

    05-31-2009

    Again Bryan you paint a very clear picture.. you write in a cryptic way, but at the same time it is very clear. One suggestion, use word pad or something with a spell checker.. just a helpful hint. You truly touch my heart and I know deep within myself you are a very sensitive person.. even if, in the outside world, you may not show it.. You do let it out and vent through your words.. That is how I started writing so many years ago.. I can feel your spiritual self and it is a sad, yet a beautif
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    Kukia

    05/31/2009

    Again I'm very thanful and wounder if I'm worthy of ur generiose prases dearest one,Arygoto onii samma=^_^=

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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