This work is not of my own

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This work is not of my own

Getaway Car......

I remember the first time I saw you......
You were chaseing down cyclones in a field......
Covered in clover that seemed to go on forever....
I never thought you'd wind up chaseing me....

Settle down or I won't hesitate to hit the hyway...
Before you lay me to waist....
I said listen up and I'll help you find something to drive....
Before you drive me insaine.....

Tired of walking,you loath the ground.....
The sidewalk hardly touches your feet....
Life moves to slowly to hold you down....
With spring in hand,you take it out on me....

So get yourself a car and drive it all alone....
Get yourself a car and drive it into the wind....
Get yourself a car that's only for one....
Get yourself a car and ride it on the wind......

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DirtyLilSecret commented on This work is not of my own

06-01-2009

Very good poem, very good picture to go with it.. I think you have a good style and flow and you have a good way of alluding to what you want to threder to kno!

SilverGirl commented on This work is not of my own

05-31-2009

Very good use of metaphores.. if indeed they were metaphores.. You got your point across very well. There is no room for misunderstandings in this piece.. what the reader reads is what the reader will surely understand.. You stand tall in your feelings in the one.. Keep up the good work.. More hugs..SIlver Girl

Kukia

05/31/2009

ya found me out onii samma,Thank you again silver=^_~=

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Kukia’s Poems (23)

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Save Me... 0
Vicariouse..I live. 0
Last Regrets(repri
sed)
1
Remember the Nights 1
The Fox Who Became a Human Girl 5
I'll be there for you...(revise
d)
4
Alone..... 3
Faith and Dreams 6
An Anime Lulliby 3
Live Delierately 2
Matters of the Heart 2
Slow Ride 4
The Canary 2
Somewhere,Som
eone
3
The Key 7
This work is not of my own 2
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Alone in Heart 6
The Oceans 7
Should I.... 3
Shadows 7
DOMINION 5