The Lord an I

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    The Lord an I
    Last night i fell asleep.I died before i woke.The Lord took my soul.As he took it he spoke.Its time to leave this dear old earth.Its time to go right now.There is nothing left for you anyway.It wouldn't matter anyhow.As we got to the pearly gates.At heavens door. I ask my dear Lord just once more.Please let me have one more day of life just to get prepared.I'd like to tell my dear wife. So she won't be scared.He said i can't do things that way.It could not be arranged.He showed me the golden book of heaven. The big book could never be changed.So it looks like i'm here to stay for eternity.One day my darling. Your going to be here with me.But until that day comes.I'll stand here alone.I'll never have to leave again.This is my eternal HOME.

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    liberalartist9 commented on The Lord an I

    01-26-2009

    This is a very nice poem, or more like a statement =) GOOD JOB. Very well crafted.
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    writerspassion commented on The Lord an I

    01-23-2009

    Very nice, i bet everyone wishes for one more day when they get to the gates
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    markrohaley commented on The Lord an I

    01-22-2009

    very nicely spoken
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    libra46 commented on The Lord an I

    01-22-2009

    This is a wonderful poem and nicely said,my husband is already there.
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    bforibus commented on The Lord an I

    01-21-2009

    and i have faith that its this beautiful place that i cant wait to get too.very nice poem
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