The Ocean's Waves.
The Ocean's Waves: 3/28/94.The ancient sea
reposes silently,
like a dog
lapping up...
water
reclaiming
the shore.
The Moon's
antediluvian
rhythm,
a mysterious
melody!
My mistress's
heavy breathing,
castin waves
over the sandbar.
The Ocean's Waves.
1 Comments
Tags: Nature
The ancient sea
reposes silently,
like a dog
lapping up...
water
reclaiming
the shore.
The Moon's
antediluvian
rhythm,
a mysterious
melody!
My mistress's
heavy breathing,
castin waves
over the sandbar.
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tygerxyz commented on The Ocean's Waves.
05-23-2009
- Very expressive, very emotive, a very pretty thought painting. The only thing is - I wish there was more. This is a very pretty little vignette but leaves me with the scent of the sea and the sound of the waves and the impression that there are living, breathing people present but it sort of stops too soon and leaves me very curious about what else might be revealed.
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