The Princess, the Maiden, and the Raven

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    The Princess, the Maiden, and the Raven

    Hail Hark and Caw! To the Prince beyond the sea
    With deception and intentions impure
    His self-interest brought the call of three
    To unwind his web of lies at the core.

    Hail beautiful Princess from another land
    Who’s heart was young and full of gold
    He took her from another man
    Because she was left by her betrothed.

    Playing the part of a single man
    He found a wounded bird; a black Raven
    Who became a bewitching woman after midnight
    And he soon became enraptured by her given fight.

    Unknowing to his Princess
    He pursued the wounded bird
    Who cawed and warned him of the dangers inside her
    And knowledge of his philandering process.

    Tried as he might to win a witch’s heart
    He failed at getting her defense from closed to open.
    Not realizing her involvement later, would cause his world to fall apart.
    By revealing his lies to a fiery Maiden.

    Hark to the Maiden of fire and vigor
    Who through a mutual friend therein
    Became friends with the Raven
    And whom Prince soon began to pursue with eager.

    Vicious soon he became to the Raven
    Who didn’t understand or want to believe with her eyes and ears
    Vicious soon he became to his Princess
    Who he chose to leave in tears.

    So after the Maiden his chase went
    Who didn’t yet see his lies
    Until she told the Raven of his pursuit
    Which to the Raven came as a shock and surprise.

    Raven witch and lass who felt no better than him
    Decided to call out his lies to warn her friend
    With a clever capture of truth
    Showed the Maiden words most uncouth

    Great thankfulness to the Raven the Maiden gave
    And respect for the truth she told so brave
    Great thankfulness to the Maiden the Raven expressed
    For opening up her eyes to lies that needed to be addressed

    The Prince beyond the sea
    Accused the Raven of a lying whore to be
    And tried to convince the Maiden the same
    But the Maiden knew the truth and gave him a lie and false claim

    Raven lass subtly check that to the Maiden no harm came
    And quietly she withdrew in the shadows; herself to reclaim
    There she worked regaining dignity
    Through determination, rest, and humility

    There Raven thought she had perhaps done wrong
    Soon to discover the abuse she had endured so long
    Unknown to Raven yet the good she had brought
    But soon to hear the great beneficence and virtue about her others thought.

    All the while the Prince pursued the Maiden
    Who’s cold shoulder he felt by this fiery woman
    Confused he soon became
    When her friends told Prince to stay away

    Tried as Prince might to understand
    Soon realized the Maiden had found another man
    And also still spoke with her friend Raven witch and lass
    Prince now finding his web becoming his own morass

    Like a rug beneath him his world was pulled undone
    As from each girl Prince lost his hold on
    And soon knowledge of his deceit his friends and family caught wind
    Leaving him alone to face himself and own shame in the end

    As time passed he learned himself to truly love
    Through the shame he felt and as others called him out
    Later time he saw the Raven who was now a Dove
    And begged forgiveness from her for his slandering bout.

    Caringly she forgave her dear friend
    Thanking him for her new King in the end
    And came the Maiden with her new Knight; who wasn’t him
    Along with the Princess and another King with forgiveness to send.

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    Phoenix9 commented on The Princess, the Maiden, and the Raven

    12-11-2008

    very well wriiten, and very well done

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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