The Rain Revised

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The Rain Revised

As the rain fell all around,

I couldn't help but think of you,

Then knees gave out,and i fell to the ground,

Wishing i could hear your voice.

Your voice becomes a distant memory,

That has begun to fade,

As i fall into this black abyss,

Swirling about me.

 I need you now,

More than ever,

I need you to save me,

From myself.

Your words oh so sweet,

Melt my aching heart,

And frees my mind,

From this abyss.

Your eyes so kind,

Lure me into a trance,

Where i forget all my worries,

And open m,y arms to a new embrace.

So if you read this,

I miss you,

And you should come home,

To me........

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

farmermason’s Poems (116)

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Spider Webs 0
Strings 0
Embers 0
The Monster Called Love 0
The best of me 0
I miss the...... 0
This Demon 0
Questions 0
A world of her own 2
The Fight Within 2
Break 0
Charades 0
The Time Is Right 0
Untitled 0
Art 1
The Covers 0
Let these words 1
Fate 0
Suicide Notes and Butterfly Kisses 0
Thinking of you 0
Battlefield 0
We remember 0
Pokemon, an acrostic poem 1
In your arms 0
the letter 0
Haunting Dreams 1
The Mirror 0
A Letter To My Fiancee 0
Your Voice 0
I need you now. 3
Ohne diche 0
The life i wanted. 2
"Without you" 0
"Angelic Kiss" 0
Something's amiss 2
The Darkness. 1
Like Suicide 1
Another Love Poem 0
Bleeding Mascara 0
Love? 0
A Better Day 1
O love 0
My Trial 0
This needs no title. 0
A lacerating phrase 1
Like a Phoenix 0
If love was true 0
Happily Ever After 0
Forgive and Forget 0
Memories of You 0
Samantha 0
Whispering lies 2
Will you go out with me? 1
Myself 2
Letting Go 1
Too far 1
Fear 1
Fading 1
Unauthorized Love 0
The Rain Revised 0
Ich will 1
Shadows 0
Deep Inside 0
Heart grenade 0
The war between us 0
Portrait 1
Imprisoning Plane 0
The beast inside 0
Wishes Upon a Star 0
Life 0
Instinct 0
Painted Image 1
Hell 0
Forbidden Fruit 0
The Phantom 1
This Night 0
Tears 0
Dead Memories 0
A guy like me 2
Three Week Anniversary 0
A little peice of heaven 0
Un answered questions 1
These Feelings 1
My Blades 0
Blades 1
Succubus 0
Wrong Perception 0
Wrong Perception 0
Untitled 0
Take Me Away 0
Faith 1
You Were There 0
Your lies 1
No Reason to live 1
She's the one 0
Controlling 0
Stuck in my head 0
I Tried 2
My Sacrifice 0
The feelings i get when i see you 0
A Lesson Learned 0
She's Different 0
You were my world 0
I gave you my heart 0
I'm Sorry 0
Lilith 0
A Sick Twist Of Fate 1
Through The Mirror 0
Why i'm so dark 3
The Pain Love Brings 0
Everlasting Fire 0
The Rain 0
My Love for you 0
My Day 0
The Darkness 0
Abaddon 0