The Search Complete

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    The Search Complete

    Will I ever see you, touch you, smell your scent
    Will I know who you are when I meet you
    Days go by as they always do
    But one day changed, each said you are who?

    I am the one who's been gone so long
    Memories past and years ago
    I was once your child wrapped in your arms
    Now I'm grown wishing life would go slow

    That fateful day when I rang that phone
    A voice on the other side shouting
    "it's my girl, this is my daughter"
    Brought joy in my life I was ready to sing

    The first call made was to my dad
    Wondering what would unfold
    I had to convince him of who I was
    And then we shared moments all told

    A few days passed and a phone rang again
    This call was possibly my mother
    Anticipation and racing thoughts
    I was hoping it was not some one other.

    Again I heard with shouts and cries
    "This is my daughter ya hear?"
    From that moment on my heart was full
    And my mother wanted me near.

    I knew I had found them deep in my heart
    The one thing I've always wanted to do
    No one could stop me, the words flowed right out
    To each of them I said, "I LOVE YOU"

    Both of my parents had finally been found
    Once more to take part in my life
    That old empty feeling was gone from my soul
    I have a family, my children and wife.
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    Indigogreen16 commented on The Search Complete

    06-05-2009

    very passionate. emotional.................................................................................

    darkness666 commented on The Search Complete

    06-02-2009

    wow this poem is amazing i love it this is a very inspiring poem and makes me wish i was as good as you keep writing i love this it captures love but also shows loneliness i rate this a 100^.^

    daniel081180 commented on The Search Complete

    06-02-2009

    this is a excellent poem it captures the feeling of love and loneliness at the same time but with so much hope great job. i give it a 50

    SilverGirl commented on The Search Complete

    06-02-2009

    This is such a sweet poem... full of emotion and happiness.. I get the joy that is flowing in your heart as you take me through a wonderful story of love, once again found.. hugs.. Silver Girl

    DatKyd commented on The Search Complete

    06-02-2009

    I really like it. and it felt as if u were filled with bliss like no other. Im glade u found them an they found you.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    ladydraeko’s Poems (22)

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    Amigo Mio 6
    Little Girl Lost 13
    Going Fishing 3
    Questions Abound 7
    Dancing with Mommy 9
    The First Birthday 8
    True Love and sweet bitterness 19
    To the sea 14
    Dear Mommy 14
    Choices 12
    The Ocean 5
    Who Am I? 12
    Following Me... 5
    Awake From Darkness 5
    Infinite 19
    The Dead of Night 12
    Life quickly changes - The story continues - 3
    The Search Complete 14
    My Hidden Self 6
    I love you 9
    Darkness Emerges 8
    Silent Serpent 21