The Sentinel

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    The Sentinel

    At the edge of a forest,
    in a clearing, on a bluff,
    stands a solitary oak tree
    cloaked in burly bark, all rough.

    On arms that stretch to heaven
    perch a crown of autumn gold
    that flutter to cull secrets
    off the winds that blow so cold.

    No one knows when it took root there -
    how it came to guard the way -
    standing resolute in purpose,
    marking the birth of each new day.
    Daring to face down gale force storms,
    defiance wills the crown unbowed -
    and in aftermath of battle
    finds no dangers' been allowed.

    And with ensuing victory
    comes a stillness soft and long -
    forest sounds fall silent just to hear
    the timber's righteous song.

    As if it were a . . . heart beat . . .
    cloaked in burly bark, all rough -
    disguised as just an oak tree,
    in a clearing, on a bluff.



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    jeanpnkldyg commented on The Sentinel

    08-15-2009

    I can see the tree in my mind's eye. I would welcome your comments on my work.

    wheelsal commented on The Sentinel

    06-15-2009

    Perfect symmetry. One of the few poets I've read on this sight that knows poetry. Can't wait to read more.

    Sleeves commented on The Sentinel

    05-18-2009

    Is the tree just a tree? The road in fact a road? To me, obviously not. But what's really great in this poem is how effortlessly coherent it is in style, topic and visuals. Solid piece. 10.

    Gman9259 commented on The Sentinel

    05-09-2009

    Excellent feeling and flow. i see it! great visuals!

    dancingbear commented on The Sentinel

    04-21-2009

    Nice soft cadence. Thanks.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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