The Shame Of The World Beneath Us

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    This is basically talkin about someone killen other people, tellin how the world will trun on one after killen another person... this poem was written when someone i knew had got killed... some peopke might not agree or even understand what im  tryin to say... so plaese if u read it n dont agree please dont tell me but if u have feed back on the peom then do ur thing.

    The Shame Of The World Beneath Us

    Is it me or is everything disappearing
    The world beneath our feet 
    Is disappearing as we speak
    Every minute we breath 
    And every minute we kill 
    A piece of the worl goes down hill

    People dont know as we kill
    And break our 10 commendments 
    GOD is bringing the rain
    That one day will bring us shame 
    Shame that brings the pain
    All because you wanted to play a game

    Thinkin its cool
    To act as a fool 
    And use these games as tools
    Thats causing Us to loose loved ones
    Family,
    Friends,
    Classmates,
    Teachers and Students,
    Mothers and Fathers,
    Sisters and Brothers,
    Aunts and Uncles,
    Grandparents too.

    NAW...NAW...NAW...
    When you loose the doves.
    You will feel the pain.
    That GOD will bring.
    Upon your face.
    All because of the games you played.
    And the tools you misused.
    Just cause u thought it was cool.
    To act as a fool.
    And the shame of the world soon will turn on you.

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    christliked commented on The Shame Of The World Beneath Us

    07-11-2009

    deep thougth right on time I am glad that you can see never stop caring about your planet and its people

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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