The Sound

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    This is a poem about the relationship of water and music and their similarities...this poem means a lot to me when a time when fear almost overcame my life, and the sound saved me...

    The Sound

     

    Once I had heard it

    The sound called out to me

    The sound of the angels

    The sound of the sea

    Twisting and Turning

    Shimmering waves

    The sound of creation

    By the sound we are saved

    Once I had heard it

    Like harps of old

    Clandestine Beauty

    Bold secrets it told

    Rhythm and Chaos

    Harmonized

    The sound is yet purer

    When we capsize

    When we give in to the water

    Let it fill up our ears

    And pump through our hearts

    And drown out our fears

    The sound is pure beauty

    The sound is pure light

    The sound is my savior

    In this perilous fight

    Once I had heard it

    The shimmering waves

    Now I sit by the sound

    And wait to be saved

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    CasimirJash commented on The Sound

    10-26-2009

    great poem, love the imagery and rhyme, and the description of sound, it's like I can feel the sound.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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