The Takeover

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    The Takeover

    Great Grandma held the rope that hung from the pond tree,
    she gave a loud yell and her body flew free!
    We held our breath as she started to fall,
    her perfect swan dive turned into a cannonball!
    She hit the water and Great Grandma went down,
    way, way down, where the fish swim around!
    Minutes went by and our thoughts were of dread,
    we were ready to jump in, when up popped her head!
    Great Grandma spit out a tadpole and swam to the shore,
    she grabbed hold of the rope swing, she was ready for more!
    We went home because there was no more hope,
    Great Grandma was not going to give up the rope!
    In the winter when the pond is frozen like slate,
    we will be there with Great Grandma, but we're hiding our skates!

    copyright 2-21-09 "Dusty"


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    Moorthy45 commented on The Takeover

    01-12-2011

    The impact of the poem is such that I start remembering about my grandma who died recently ,but whose memories are still green in my mind. Moorthy45

    BessFromKenton commented on The Takeover

    11-22-2009

    What a wonderful poem. Everyone needs an older relative like this! Mine taught me to ride roller coasters and skinny dip.

    Crush commented on The Takeover

    07-30-2009

    i loved this. what a lovely tribute to your grandma.

    UnworthyFather commented on The Takeover

    06-18-2009

    Very humorous!! I really enjoyed this poem! Kinda reminds me of the Joe Nichols song "Tequila makes her clothes fall off". Can I meet Great Grandma?10

    drewking commented on The Takeover

    02-21-2009

    lol,, thats a frisky little grandma, sweet poem. it kinda takes me back to when i was a kid..

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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