The Visions

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The Visions

Random thoughts and visions seen... horrid views that carry no being... All these things comprised in me. A mind so tortured it abandons itself... what is true what is fake... I can't tell nor can I take what may be nothing but an illusion before my eyes... what might be something so real... where to turn for answers... where to go for hope...

The world traps me within myself... apart withdrawn... tormented tortured closed apart  by myself... what is the point of breathing, what is the point of continuing… a loss of control for what may be nothing but my own imagination ran wild with a thought… why was I made like this? Where is my joy to be held? The walls close in constantly with no way out… and nothing matters because it’s not real but no one else can tell… it seems so real… 

It seems so true…. but it’s an illusion nothing but a thought… a concept taken me on a wayward spin of my own subconscious delusions and paranoid fears… Till again I can’t stand the light of day and I become more secluded… but it seems so real!!

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snowdove commented on The Visions

06-19-2009

wow how i know what your feeling there!! i myself have and are feeling what you wrote. small world. great poem, looking forwards to tlking with you more and reading your poems. great job

Aaros commented on The Visions

06-19-2009

I can definitely relate to this. It's kind of crazy how "...it's an illusion nothing but a thought..." is so real.

RagusChaos

06/19/2009

LOL thank you I kinda thought people would think i was a bit nuts for trying to explain what it's like to be a bit off... lol

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

RagusChaos’s Poems (14)

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Perspectives in Place 7
Is It Time? 3
Cuz it Never Ends 0
The Visions 2
The Meaning Of Torn 1
Lost Words, Empty Mouth, Closed Ears 1
A Piece Of Everything 0
Remembrance 0
Garden Of Savages 2
Master's Call 0
The Feild 1
The Loss 1
The Reach 3