The Way I Feel

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    The Way I Feel

    I feel like a plane,
    Flying away from me.
    I fell like I want to cry,
    Like a baby.
    I feel like I'm mad,
    Full of raging fire.
    I feel like a bird,
    I can fly higher and higher.
    I feel like I'm sad,
    Tears coming down my face.
    I feel like a cold hard brick,
    In a fireplace.
    I feel like I'm a happy clown,
    I feel like I'm disapointed with a frown.
    Those are my feelings I have shared with you.
    What are your feelings?
    Come on I told you!!


     

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    DatKyd commented on The Way I Feel

    11-05-2010

    then u understand sum of my feelings
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    hdmac commented on The Way I Feel

    08-22-2009

    Your poem is spinning and spinning into a spiral. I can't seem to grasp what you mean because you go from being a brick to a clown to a frown.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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