Thinking

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  • Loss

    Thinking

     Why was I thinking
    I could just move on
    Why was I thinking
    That maybe you wasnt the one
    Why was I thinking
    That it just wouldnt last
    Why was i thinking
    We fell too fast
    Because I thought
    We could workout anything
    Because I thought
    We became enemies
    Because I thought
    I could cheat and lie
    Because I thought
    Your love could never die
    I know my thoughts and thinking became insane
    But forgive me and love me again

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    tierra7 commented on Thinking

    07-08-2009

    wonderful!!!! absolutely wonderful!!! i feel the emotion ...
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    ValentineD commented on Thinking

    06-24-2009

    Thats really good it has heart put into it and i think thats important.
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    lilmommy commented on Thinking

    06-23-2009

    thats nice i like the way you wrote it cause its true are thought and are thinking can really screw things up
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    superjayallday

    06/24/2009

    thanks for the rating and comment it really means alot

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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