This world

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  • jaylana21
  • Just doing what i do best ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This world

Its crazy how life changes
Whether you want to or not you go through tough phases
Everybody goes through badd stuff in life Nobodys life is perfect and if You think that reality check
No disrepect or voliation
Just simply statin the facts of This nation
So many thingz goin wrong in dis world Murdererz
Racist
Rapist
How could u voliate something so percious Not only to females but god Who created us
In this world theres some crazy people
Our parentz try to protect us
But we teenagers now so we think they being over protective
But thats not thecase
They just dont want us to get hurt or killed
Just think bout ur parent wakin up one day
Finding out ur dead wit no chance of sayin goodbye
Earsed from society
No trace left behind
Just disappeared without any sign
This world is crazy can I get a witness my grandma always says
Us kids have no fear
We think that life is so unfair
When we can't go some where
But think of how things have became so dangerous
Its time for us kidz to change this
Make something of ourselfs
Stay out the streets
Make life better for you and me
Make it better for furture generation & society
Just a wake up call for you & me..

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RickyArsenal commented on This world

05-30-2009

more rthyming I mean... then I really like ur thinking, u sure got a message gal, pass it on, your peers need it....

RickyArsenal commented on This world

05-30-2009

Jay Dear, alwayz remember to start God with a capital "G' , then rthyming would add more beauty to the work of thy hand, good work!!!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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