age is just a number

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    • jaylana21
    • Just doing what i do best ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    age is just a number
    Age is just a numba
    But memories last forever
    I dont just wanna be a memory though
    I wanna be ur wifey,friend,and lover
    But time after time You say we have 2 wait because of our age
    But I wonder if your afraid of wat people might say
    So im waitn
    And mins turn to hours and hours turn 2 dayz
    Time seems to stand still Every time someone says ur name
    This waitin is driving me insane
    But its worth it because the longer I wait
    The stronger mah feelings become
    Each day I wait for us too finally be I realize your the only person for me....

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    Lamar86 commented on age is just a number

    04-21-2019

    Very very late comment but, I enjoyed this. The emotion is clearly depicted throughout the poem.
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    RickyArsenal commented on age is just a number

    05-30-2009

    Jay, re u 4 real? re u really 16? never mind, just blabbing, love the way u transmit ur feelings into writing like I said, keep it up!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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