Thought

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Thought

Do you know what you talk about
Do you know where the talk turns
Which way it burns
Do you know what you do
To another do you try to hurt
Or lie in wait for them to be the dirt

Could there be away to clear your thoughts
To think a nce thought send it to the sky
Let it fly high and hit the mind out there that is listening
and no at the beginning
It is just the simple thought run amuck
that does distruct

Look inside and we find
the emotions become intwined
but the mind says this or that
but all and all we conclude
i am not a fool
and will think free.

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DRZRECTR commented on Thought

10-17-2009

i AM GLAD YOU HAVE READ AND COMMENTED TO ME AND I HAVE READ YOUR POETRY... 'THOUGHT' THE WORDS ARE ABSOLUTELY CORRECT FOR WHEN WE SPEAK WE MAY HURT OR WE CAN GET HURT BACK.. i HOPE THAT IN THE THINGS YOU READ FROM ME IT MAKES YOU SMILE CAUSE IT IS LOVE I WANT TO BRING...TY

Charlie23 commented on Thought

10-08-2009

This is great poem! I smile at the idea of my thought being heard by another. Well written!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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