Thy Undying Remorse

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    Thy Undying Remorse

    Hate me if you want

    Forget me if you dare

    But don't act like I don't hurt

    As if I don't even care



    Fuck it I'm doing what I choose

    Living a dream I thought wasn't real

    I wont work so hard just to lose

    Just gonna pretend that I do not feel



    Why cant you just be happy that I'm giving it my all

    That I'm making something of myself

    I'm not climbing my way to the top just to let you watch me fall

    I guess I just have to lock it away, put my heart back on the shelf



    It kills me that I hurt you

    The pain I feel inside could never be expressed

    Is there even such a word, My god I wish I knew

    But I've made my choice my past is laid to rest

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    GucciGurl commented on Thy Undying Remorse

    05-28-2009

    Again I say WOW. Makes me think of my own son who is now 25. At your age we wanted one thing for him and he wanted another. We almost lost him over that. But now he does what he loves and we have learn to love what he does/ Great work for ppl who understand

    TheRaven commented on Thy Undying Remorse

    03-03-2009

    I've read this before, bro, but reading it just now struck me deep. Honestly, just about bringing tears to my eyes by making me think.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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