Till The Music Ends

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Simply written from the heart and inspired by a wonderful woman who doesn't feel the same way about me as I do her... Regardless, I am glad to have her in my life!

Till The Music Ends

The moon, shining ever so bright

    Bathes the land in bitter cold light;

Ghostly shadows moving around

    Pacing their dance over the ground.

 

Their feet move, dancing on air

    Light gleaming off bodies so bare;

Around and around they quickly twirl

    Bodies entwined they whirl and whirl.

 

Haunting music drives their step

    Songs written with promises all un-kept;

Unearthly melodies filling the night

    Keeping the beat, step left, step right.

 

These are the spirits of long lost loves

    That flitter about like shadowy doves;

Yet are the lovers all unrequited

    Dancing in vain... never united.

 

My soul dances this dance tonight

    Love lost in the chill stark light;

Dance, my love, dance and ever tend

    Until that day when the music ends.   

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CasimirJash commented on Till The Music Ends

09-01-2009

Don't stop til you get enough, lol Great Poem. I enjoyed it

RicoChameleon

09/01/2009

Thank you! I appreciate it!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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