To The Fallen Family

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    To The Fallen Family

    To the fallen family who never pushed themselves further,
    To the fallen family who used blame and hatred
    as an excuse for their failure,
    To the fallen family whose hatred,
    became the cause of so many wars and hardships,
    which brought nothing but suffering to the innocent ones,
    To the fallen family whose actions,
    tainted those who were to weak minded
    to defend themselves from their environment,
    To the fallen family who used the weaker
    as an example of what I shouldn't become,
    To the fallen family who did everything
    they could to protect me from the enemies of success,
    To the fallen family who faught
    when I was too weak to battle,
    To the fallen family, I thank you for giving me the opportunity
    to be the story of victory that arises
    from the fallen family that brought themselves together
    from what was left of the fallen remains.

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    kathib commented on To The Fallen Family

    08-11-2009

    good one, had balls, wasn't mushy and over sentimental, told it as it was

    BLUEEYES commented on To The Fallen Family

    11-25-2008

    SO GREAT, AND SO TRUE

    boriquavtec

    06/08/2009

    Thank you for your comment

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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