torrents?

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    torrents?
    you are the torrents of rain,
    calming me down,
    causing me pain,
    shattering the calm serenity,
    I am sorry i believed,
    i'm not very,
    easily decieved,
    are you a master of disguise?
    you stole my breath and i drowned,
    but still my heart,
    to yours is bound,
    even in death i still will love you.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on torrents?

    10-09-2010

    There's a sense of loyalty, dedication and a love that's not selfish being displayed here. Good write.
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    Gabriel85 commented on torrents?

    03-05-2009

    I like the clever turn of phrase ('...still my heart') aswell.
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    WordSlinger commented on torrents?

    02-05-2009

    but still my heart, to yours is bound, even in death i still will love you. My Fav
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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