torrents?

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    torrents?
    you are the torrents of rain,
    calming me down,
    causing me pain,
    shattering the calm serenity,
    I am sorry i believed,
    i'm not very,
    easily decieved,
    are you a master of disguise?
    you stole my breath and i drowned,
    but still my heart,
    to yours is bound,
    even in death i still will love you.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on torrents?

    10-09-2010

    There's a sense of loyalty, dedication and a love that's not selfish being displayed here. Good write.
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    Gabriel85 commented on torrents?

    03-05-2009

    I like the clever turn of phrase ('...still my heart') aswell.
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    WordSlinger commented on torrents?

    02-05-2009

    but still my heart, to yours is bound, even in death i still will love you. My Fav
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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