Total Eclipse


  • Devotion

    Total Eclipse

    Devotion runs like emotions of tethered souls
    Never known love like this, with passion so thick
    Hard to imagine what might happen if
    I manage to lose hold of it, What I know is this
    I'm in control and my focus is to mold it
    Until it's compossed of goldeness I put my soul in this
    So that I'll know for sure that when its all over I can
    look back hold it in and see it exactly for what it is
    a moment in poet's bliss.


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    graceladymn commented on Total Eclipse


    Life is a total eclipse of all that came before, courage and inspiration will help fill the fullest canvas of our lives out bringing to birth all that is within. Then its back to a clean slate, yeppers.

    sk commented on Total Eclipse


    I gave this a 10 also...not sure why the total is only 7.2; someone must be rating without commenting...anyway, good piece of writing.

    MizBlaze commented on Total Eclipse


    Sickness... I give it a 10+

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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