Touching

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    Touching

     My days are consumed with thoughts.

    Thoughts of you,
    Thoughts of us,
    Touching,
    Holding,
    Caressing,
    Kissing;

    Thoughts of desires and fantasies,
    Thoughts that burn me insde with flames of desire,
    Burning me up,
    Tearing me down,
    Consuming me,
    Enveloping me in an inferno of desire with

    Thoughts of you,
    Thoughts of us,
    Kissing,
    Holding,
    Caressing,
    Touching . . .

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    Mareann commented on Touching

    01-02-2010

    okay, I'm feeling this one too! very romantic poem, nice share --Mary
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    warsaw commented on Touching

    08-26-2009

    Thank you so much for sharing I loved and understood it sincerely WARSAW
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    Rendida commented on Touching

    08-24-2009

    the rate box isn't working I originally gave you a 10 but wouldn't let me slect that number or any number for some reason... then I just started clicking on numbers and it finally gave you an eight.... One other person it wouldn't let me me give a number at all...sorry but I loved your poem
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    Rendida

    08/24/2009

    not sorry that I loved your poem sorry that it only allowed me to rate it an 8 lol... i'm dug in deep aren't I ....I love your poetry

    Rendida commented on Touching

    08-24-2009

    The all consuming flame of passion is one we all dream of getting daught up in.... short but elegantly done....
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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