Trapped within the Minds of Poe

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Trapped within the Minds of Poe

By: Adam M. Snow

Once upon a nightful somber,
entranced within a loreful slumber;
a murky pass it feels to be:
this dream, this world it calls me.

Dragging, falling deeper within a void,
my mistress Fear and I devoid.
Clinching my chest, my racing heart pounds,
alone in darkness with many sounds;
one in particular from a raven afar,
'Nevermore.' said he with my ears ajar.

Intrigued was I by an outspoken raven
perched upon a branch, in a realm of non-haven.
'Nevermore.' said he, spreading wings to flutter,
"Where am I?" I whispered in terror, utter."
"All that I see or seem
is it but a dream within a dream?"
but the raven he quoth again, 'Nevermore.'
lost I feel, lost evermore.

The raven vanishes, taking me back to slumber;
waking again with my eyes a somber.
Finding my hands and feet a bound,
above a pit with a pendulum confound.
Approached by a man thought to be dead,
Poe he spoke with so much dread.
'We loved with a love that was more than love.'
spoke he, as I lay watching the pendulum above.

It swings with a flutter as it slowly drops to me,
my voice is muted; I am force to see
as the pendulum drops, my flesh gets torn.
My eyes again fell somber as I forlorn.
I close my eyes welcoming death,
getting ready to take my last breath.

I feel it wash over me, it is just that;
my memories flashing of images like tat.
This nightmarish of a dream, I feel forsaken;
my sorrow; I could not awaken.

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Tempestlady commented on Trapped within the Minds of Poe

02-04-2014

i agree it did take on a somewhat formal tone. But i have to say i really like it and i believe artie would too. write on.........there is an audience for this

jenifer commented on Trapped within the Minds of Poe

12-22-2013

i understand that u like poe , but i feel like his formate is holding you back some , u need to better embrace your own voice.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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Trapped within the Minds of Poe 2
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Requiem 1
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Who am I 2
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