True Simplicity

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True Simplicity

A simple answer to the question I’ve been asking myself for about a year
Executed perfectly, flowing out like endless magic
Tears pouring out of my eyes no longer packed with sadness
But filled with peace
 
You came like a god sent angel to give me everything I needed
You made my life perfect, even with its flaws
And without a doubt I know I’m blessed
I can finally be happy knowing I’m being honest with myself
 
Yet the best part of all is that it isn’t love and probably never will be
You’re like the best friend who always says the right things
And always at the right moments
Right now I couldn’t imagine my life without you

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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