Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

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    Twinkle Twinkle Little Star
    Twinkle twinkle little star, how I wonder where you are? High above the world so high, like an angel in the sky...I close my eyes and gaze into the depth of my heart to see the pain. I try to grasp a hold of it and wish it away with my minds eye yet it will not budge! That darn pain is a stubborn little booger! "Okay", I say to the pain that has now taken an even more firm grasp of my heart, "You win for now!" I open my eyes just a little and they well with the tears that I have been holding back. Awh man! I am so goshdarned tired of crying! I long desperately to hold a smile in my heart everyday. To feel the love that I have longed to have for so long...Just once I wish to be completely and unselfishly filled to the brim with more joy that no ONE person could possibly muster! "Little star, is that possible?" Love is such a confusing and complicated entity...I often wonder how one could love something or someone so much, so deeply that the pain you feel hurts as if you've been stabbed in the heart? Gosh...if only the twinkle in the stars so high above would shine brightly on his heart and soul so he would understand me, love me unconditionally and accept my love for him without questioning...

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    mamasan commented on Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

    10-27-2009

    Your reference to 'twinkle twinkle little star' brings a wide smile to my face. It brings me back to when I was just five and my dad taught me the verse. But your reference to all the pain you have imbedded in your heart troubles me. Especially, because I have experienced that same dark pain. However, I have been on a spiritual quest so that I might be able to learn why and how to rid myself of these painful times spent in what I have come to recognize were in vain, though painful. Why? Because my spiritual venture, over these many years, have pointed me to the right knowledge that I am after all responsible for myself above all. I am sure by the way you write that you also have a knowledge base, if I may say so humbly and out of compassion. I do not know the answer to send your way except to advise :move on' 'give it up' and make a positive intention to get yourself moved out of the misery you so eloquently describe and on to 'greener pastures with the sun shining' as is said. Young lady, my intention is to reach out to you and tell you that there is a light at the end of the tunnel.......and the light is there because we hold it in our very hands. Amen
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    mamasan

    10/27/2009

    May I correct that nothing is in vain. Even those painful experiences sometimes teach us the most.

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

    01-03-2009

    I enjoyed this poem. Although it is untraditional in form & technique; it expresses the feelings of so many of us. Keep writing.
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    Plot121 commented on Twinkle Twinkle Little Star

    12-02-2008

    This was kinda cute and I enoyed reading it most of your work seems to be written in essay for m and your descriptions were very nice I liked everything I saw keep up the good work Robert. If you get time comment and rate some of my new stuff Robert
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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