unhappiest moment

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    This is a poem I just thought of.

    unhappiest moment

        A long time ago when I was four
              I heard a loud knocking on the door
              I answered and looked quite dismayed 
              Couse there on the floor my brother laid


               My mother cooed and my father awed
               As that baby cried and sqwaaed
                I told my mom to send It away
                 But despite complaints my brother stayed
                

                  I got to like the little guy
                  Until the day they asked if I
                     Would let them have another

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    Dancer022597 commented on unhappiest moment

    01-23-2010

    Lol i know how u feel, ive got a lil sis and she drives me up a wall! great job and funny work!
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    jharrison

    01/30/2010

    ty!

    vava2360 commented on unhappiest moment

    01-20-2010

    it's wonderful. i can't really say i can relate to it because im the youngest. But overall, it was an outstanding poem. Great imagery and use of words.
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    jharrison

    01/20/2010

    Thanks

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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