Untitled 09

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  • Passion

    Untitled 09

     Tear drops fall in a moment so sad
    Peace is the calling
    Love must retain
    Freedom for all
    We walk lonely steps
    We glide through a life
    Existence for one
    Existence for both
    One is consumed
    One is the host
    If a man cries alone
    Does anyone care
    If a memory is lost
    Does the past not live on
    Have you ever hoped yourself into a feeling of bliss
    Have you ever seen the picture you just barely missed
    I call for the one who almost was there
    I hear her sweet music but can't feel her stare

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    Charlie23 commented on Untitled 09

    01-19-2010

    I enjoyed your writing in this poem, and the title, "untitled 09" is driving me crazy, it so needs a beuatiful title to go with your beautiful words...
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    DJCarson

    01/19/2010

    Thank you for reading

    Marsink commented on Untitled 09

    01-18-2010

    You could call it, 9 Remembrances. I liked it; the mood of melancholy is prevalent and is ripe with imagery!
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    poett commented on Untitled 09

    01-18-2010

    you write so beautiful, I love this poem. This last part captivated me the most and took my imagination flying wondering and asking what if that someone was there... maybe the poem would be a love story to never end... Have you ever hoped yourself into a feeling of bliss Have you ever seen the picture you just barely missed I call for the one who almost was there I hear her sweet music but can't feel her stare
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