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    Untitled

     Beofre I go
    I'd like to say
    Time has forgotten
    My old and tattered ways

    My spirit has lifted
    And flown away
    I am without
    A final destination

    Before I go
    I do not want to see
    Tears of sadness
    But only tears of joy

    And then a small song, a little smile, and then, nothing.

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    gregaone commented on Untitled

    07-22-2009

    good poem..Untitled IS the title, isnt it? By the nature of the content..i think the title is perfect..
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    origionalmerlin commented on Untitled

    07-03-2009

    it does, but i feel the same lol well done poet! write on (with titles)
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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